Sunday, February 26, 2012

Is my resume too wordy? Where should I make revisions?



Summary



Results-oriented Production Clerk with a proven track record in Document Management services within or between departments. Verify customer and order information for correctness, checking it against previously obtained information as necessary. Successfully managed internal relationships ensuring work processes were completed on time, to a high standard and in compliance with strict specifications. Communicate with customers, employees, and other individuals to answer questions, disseminate or explain information, take orders, and address complaints. Proficient in entering, storing, and retrieving information on computer-aided equipment. Maintained, replenished and repaired materials and supplies key to business processes.



Professional Experience



Colorado Springs Legal Copy, Colorado Springs, CO

Production Clerk (2003-Current)

Read job orders to determine the type of work to be done, the quantities to be produced, and the materials needed. Monitor machine operation, and make adjustments as necessary to ensure proper operation. Operated auxiliary machines such as collators, pad and tablet making machines, staplers, and paper punching, folding, cutting, and perforating machines. Contacted suppliers to verify shipment details. Maintained files such as maintenance records and bills of lading.

鈥?Enhanced ability to discern workload priorities and manage multiple projects with changing needs while acting as the liaison between client and company headquarters.

鈥?Effectively planned and implemented efficient means for production in a timely work flow while ensuring the security of sensitive document information.

鈥?Developed profitable relationships with suppliers, internal and external staff and management resulting in increased production of 25 percent.



Rocky Mountain High Wheels, Colorado Springs, CO

Sales Associate/ Bicycle Technician (2005-2006)

Recommended and provided advice on a wide variety of products and services. Computed charges for merchandise or services and received payments. Assembly of new bicycles. Prepared merchandise for display. Receive, examine, and tag articles to be repaired, cleaned and stored. Repaired, replaced, and adjusted equipment or accessories for custormer fit and performance using hand tools. Align wheels, replace tires and tubes.

鈥?Developed efficient means of active listening to provide excellent customer service and ensure customer satisfaction.

鈥?Maintained working independently with minimal supervision or as a cooperative team member.

鈥?Mechanically inclined; ability to work well with tools.



Penney J C CO Inc - Department Store the Citadel-South, Catalog Telephone Shopping, Colorado Springs, CO

Credit Associate (2003-2003)

Answer telephones to provide information and receive orders. Keep records of customers' charges and payments. Evaluate customers' computerized credit records and payment histories to decide whether to approve new credit, based on predetermined standards. Receive charge slips or credit applications by mail, or receive information from salespeople or merchants by telephone.

鈥?Ensured the security of sensitive customer information while handling all internal and external calls.

鈥?Assisted sales associates, via multiple phone lines, in helping customers鈥?access sensitive credit information while researching and resolving customer complaints



Computer Skills

Windows, Macintosh, MS Word, MS Excel, MS Outlook, IBM AS 400, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe InDesign, Adobe PageMaker, Internet, E-mail, keyboarding, indexing, ten-key.

Is my resume too wordy? Where should I make revisions?
Sadly, most employers only look at the first page of a resume! This looks pretty concise but you should try and make it a little shorter. You can always talk yourself up later, and add contacts and more jobs you had.Is my resume too wordy? Where should I make revisions?
As long as it stays on one page, you are okIs my resume too wordy? Where should I make revisions?
Yes it is too wordy. Combine some of your sentences and keep all the verb tense the same - past. For example in JC Penny

answered catalog calls, evaluated customer credit records, approve new credit while maintaining customer information security.

Drop a few of the adjectives. Read it as if your are a stranger reading it for the first time. Could they figure out what you did at each job?

Help 7th grade math first can you give me the answers to these problems?

1. Forty-five of the 80 students walk to school. What is the ratio of students who walk to school to students who do not walk to school?



2. A merchant bought a stereo at wholesale for $90.00 and marked up the price 75% to sell the stereo at retail.

a. What was the retail price, and the sales-tax rate is 6%, what is the total price including sales tax.



3. Fraction Decimal Percent

2 1/3 a. b.

c. d. 3 1/3%



4. What number is 250 percent of 60?



5. John measured the diameter of his bicycle tire and found that it was 24 inches. What is the distance around the tire to the nearest inch?(Use 3.14 for 蟺)



6. The ratio of the measures of two angles was 4 to 5. If the sum of their measures was 180藲, what was the measure of the smaller angle?



7. w - 0.15 = 4.9



8.(2*3)2power - 2(3 2power)



9.

a. (-8)(-6)(-5)

______________

(-4)(-3)(-2)



b. -6 - 5(-4) - 3(-2)(-1)





Please help me if you can.Help 7th grade math first can you give me the answers to these problems?
haha. someone's a little to lazy to do their math homework now arent they? :P

(it's okay, im a 7th grader too. I have copied my friend's math homework before.)

BY THE WAY: i didnt get some answers, and forgive me if some are wrong.



1. 9/16 : 7/16



2. $166.95



3. ?



4. 150



5. 75 inches



6. ?



7. w = 5.05



8. ?



9. a. ?

b. ?Help 7th grade math first can you give me the answers to these problems?
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Is there a credit card that enforces its no-identification requirement, unlike MasterCard?

I have a MasterCard credit card, and I often get asked for identification to use the card. This is a flagrant violation of MasterCard's merchant policy that forbids merchants from requiring identification to accept a MasterCard.



I find this to be a huge inconvenience. Why do stores have self-swipe credit card readers if you have to hand them your card and identification anyway? They often even wait until after I've put my card and wallet away before asking to see the card and identification. I've started using cash for most in-person transactions to avoid this problem.



I'm also tired of hearing stores claim this is for my protection. That's complete bunk. I'm not liable for a penny of credit card fraud. Stores are inconveniencing their customers to save at most a few pennies per sale in fraud losses.



I've used MasterCard's online complaint page to report these violations many times without any relief. Is there a credit card company I could switch to that actually enforces a no-identification rule? I would love to start using a credit card again instead of cash.Is there a credit card that enforces its no-identification requirement, unlike MasterCard?
Who actually pays for fraud? The end user - either directly or indirectly. You are responsible up until notification - so your card gets lost, someone uses it and then you report it - you pay. Other losses - you pay in a round about way - through fees, higher shop charges etc. These costs are passed on to us by the companies involved.



If there was such a card, criminals would target users and steal them because it would be easier for them to rip us off.
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  • Do you get the smell of witch hunt, new Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores?

    Do you get the smell of witch hunt, new Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores?



    Today, from no where we were told about the so called Muslim Terrorism in Australia. We are sick and tired of these types of false and fabricated stories. Specifically, no one knows about the details of the story. Yet, Islam and Muslims bashing is up and running. Why? Because Islam and Muslim bashing is the most spectacular sport in the town! We went through these types of tragedies and deliberate ploy to murder truth and free speech. In the long run “they” had eggs on their face. We know these peoples! They thrive on lies, deceptions, deceits and destruction. Shakespeare knew them. Charles Dickens knew them!



    I can see new kind of witch hunt, Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores in the horizon. However, I am confident it will backfire on them like poor old and misguided Crusaders!



    Many hate merchants including the American Hate Merchant Denial Pipes were using the paragraph below and many other laughable and imaginary materials to incite violence against the Arabs and Muslims! This accusation of today is puzzling me. I hope it is not another Dr. Mohamad Haneef episode.





    What do you think about the Muslim’s role in Australian Bush fire?





    CBS News report quoted celebratory messages posted on Internet forums supportive of al Qaeda:4



    In a message entitled “Al Qaeda behind Australia’s bushfires”, a member of one forum who uses the name “Osama1” talked about the terrible devastation and loss of lives caused by the fires, which he hoped were the work of al Qaeda. “Imagine if all this was the work of an al Qaeda raid against Australia who is taking part in the wars on Iraq and Afghanistan … how awesome would that be?” He also urged Islamist militants around the world to “fight the enemy” through this new form of jihad.



    Source: http://www.nationalobserver.net/pdf/2009…Do you get the smell of witch hunt, new Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores?
    Al-Qaeda are a group of murderers, cutthroats and monsters who take the faith of Islam and give it a bad name. People don't realize or don't care to realize they want to kill all of us who refuse to be forced to kneel down before Allah. It has nothing to really do with Afghanistan, Iraq, the West Bank, Saudi Arabia, or any other reason they give for killing. If none of those situations were around, they'd look for a reason to kill.



    I don't want violence either, but unfortunately freedom is not free. I'm all for doing whatever it takes to stop them. I know that if I was in charge, my response would be much stronger than the cowards running the show now.
    In Australia do they have a trial by media or fair trial by judge and jury?

    Do they have rules of evidence and presumption of innocence?

    Or are the Muslims guilty before even being charged?Do you get the smell of witch hunt, new Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores?
    Take it easy. We will find out the people behind this episode. Australians are fairly good bunch you know.
    So, are other Muslims joining in the criticism of Al Qaeda? Or are they sitting on the sidelines watching their brothers wage war on the West. Also, who else has suicide bombers? No one. That's who. By and large I think most Muslims are peaceful people who just want to get along, but far too few of them criticize the radicals.Do you get the smell of witch hunt, new Spanish inquisitions and Conquistadores?
    I think the issue are:

    1. A misguided Australian academic used totally false and fabricated materials to incite against Muslims.

    2. A dangerous person like Daniel Pipes have been promoting that ill motivated Australian academic's useless article like as the Gospel truth.

    3. No one died inside Australia for terrorism. However, more than 200 people died due to bush fire! Most of those bush fire was due to arsonist’s mindless act.

    4. None of those arsonists (convicted or accused) are not from Muslim or Arab background.
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  • Can someone please help me translate these sentences from romeo and juliet to modern diction??

    so we have to take these sentences from romeo and juliet and translate them to the dialect of today, how people today would say the same thing just in defferent terms.

    1 "I pray you, sir, what saucy merchant was this that was so full of his ropery?"

    --would this be "plase, sir, could you tell me that vulgar merchants name?"

    2 "is your man secret? did you ne'er hear say, Two may keep counsel, putting one away?"

    --i have just about no idea with this one could it be something like "are you sure he can keep a secret, because it only takes two slips before he is put away." lol idk

    3 "but she, good soul, had as lieve see a toad, a very toad, as see him"

    --"she sees him as a toad"???

    4 "i am aweary, give me leave awhile. Fie, how my bones ache! what a jaunce have I!"

    --"leave me alone, im sore and tired from the long ride."

    5 "then hie you hence to Friar Laurence' cell; There stays a husband to make you a wife."

    "hurry off to Frair Laurence your husband awaits you there."Can someone please help me translate these sentences from romeo and juliet to modern diction??
    You could have a lot of fun with this stuff. Might depend on how colloquial you wanna get.

    1. Hey, dude, who's that lyin' cheatin' con artist?

    2. Can your friend keep a secret? Of course--two can keep a secret provided you bump off one of the two.

    3. She'd rather see a toad than him.Can someone please help me translate these sentences from romeo and juliet to modern diction??
    yeah- this could be loads of fun! You can do it.



    to get you started:

    5. Yo- goto frair laurences' hizzie- your hubby is waiting there to marry you! go bizzitch he's waiting...





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    can you please help me make this so it doesn't look like i plagiarized

    I had 2 hours until school i just couldn't do it without plagiarizing



    Rome Was a very good land army, They trained all day all night. Rome was not very good at sea battles but Rome trained on land how to row the boat and they practiced for weeks until the war came. They had used a technique that made the fight a lot easier they used a plank to cross their ship into cartages ship so they could have a fight on their ship and basically made it a land fight. About carthage Carthage was a city-state on the Greek model that had been founded by Phoenicians from Tyre in the 8th century. It was the strongest city in the Western Mediterranean by the 3rd century and its wealth rested on trade. Carthaginian merchants went from one end of the Mediterranean to the other, the citys fleets were huge and its army was one of the best in the ancient world.

    It was Carthage that pried loose the Greek hold on the western ports, and Carthaginian merchants traded as far north as England for Cornish tin and down the West African coast for gold and ivory. Like Rome, Carthage learned how to make use of the manpower of its conquered peoples, incorporating them into the Carthaginian army as auxiliaries. Unlike Rome, but like the Greeks, the Carthaginians also made extensive use of mercenaries. By the early 200 Carthage had expanded not only across North Africa but had control of the Belearic Islands, Sardinia, Corsica, and much of Sicily. She took the goods from these regions, and her own fertile hinterland, and shipped them to eastern ports. Once Rome had conquered most of Italy, it was only a matter of time before these two ambitious and powerful empires came face to face with one another. But both sides drifted unintentionally into hostilities, with drastic consequences for both.

    Rome was not a naval power and had little or no experience in war at sea. Before the first Punic war the Roman Republic had not campaigned outside the Italian Peninsula. The Republic's military strength was on land and her greatest assets were the discipline and courage of her soldiers. The boarding-bridge allowed her to use her marines against the superior Carthaginian naval skills. The Romans application of boarding tactics worked; they won several battles, most notably tho tyndaris and ecnomus

    Despite its advantages, the boarding bridge had serious drawbacks: it could not be used in rough seas since the stable connection of two working ships endangered each others structure. Operating in rough seas, the device became useless and was abandoned. According to Bone breaker Professor of Naval Architecture at Delft with the estimated weight of one ton for the boarding bridge it is most improbable that the stability of a with a is placement of about 250m would be seriously upset

    Some other historians believe that its weight on the prow compromised the ship's navigability and the Romans lost almost two entire fleets to storms in 255 and in 249 largely due to the instability caused by the device. These losses were probably the main reason for the abandonment of the boarding ridge in ship design by the end of the war. As Roman improved and the Roman crews became more experienced the boarding-bridge was no longer used in battle. It is not mentioned in period sources after the battle of Ecnomus and apparently the that decided the first Punic war was won without

    They did not choose to make this ship they had to because in the war they had to have a Sea fight, They had tactics that made them Have a land battle basically and they made a custom plank that dropped down on the enemies ship and they all rushed in and killed them. They constructed this ship with wood, they did not use it until they learned how to row the boat and use itI need help making this "BAd?'?
    You should have done your homework earlier....I need help making this "BAd?'?
    plagerizing is bad and illegal. you should be ashamed of yourself

    Elder Scrolls OBLIVION(xbox360) Vampire HELP!?

    I am pretty much at a dead spot on oblivion..I want to get a cure for my vampirism, im tired of trying to do things @ night



    I went to the lady who said she has a cure but while trying to get those grand soul gems, i couldnt find any...so i got online for help..I saw lots of cheats %26amp; answers tellin me where 2 get these soul gems so i took some out of a case in one of the guilds %26amp; i took some out of a case @ Arcane Univ..but when I went back 2 the lady, to give them to her..the only option when i was talking to her was "no i dont have them yet"



    I looked in my inventory and it shows that i stole them (which i did) I thought only merchants wouldnt take stolen things?



    The only other way I could get them is by buying them. But when youre turned into a vampire no one wants to talk to you! theres no way i can buy them because all the mrechants say "you wont get any of my blood"



    Should I start over? Do you have to get turned into a vampire? Or is it a random thing?



    Please help!Elder Scrolls OBLIVION(xbox360) Vampire HELP!?
    Feed on someone. That way no one will notice your vampirism. Then buy the stuff. (and make sure they're empty)



    P.S. When you have to get bloodgrass there's a bug that'll cause her not to recognize any bloodgrass. Go to ex-Oblivion gates though and you can find some.



    P.S.S. Or you could buy the Vile-Lair plug-in via XB Live and use the new content as an easy way to get rid of your vampirism. Note, however, that once you're cured you can NOT become a vampire again. (that also applies with that Vampire Cure quest)Elder Scrolls OBLIVION(xbox360) Vampire HELP!?
    IT HAPPEN TO MY BRO WHEN HE WAS PLAYING THAT GAME AND TO BUY SOMETHING FROM THE MARKETPLACE

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    Elder Scrolls OBLIVION(xbox360) Vampire HELP!?
    If you are in the thieves guild, sell them to your fence and buy them back.

    Yes you get infected with hemofilia and if you don't get cured (at a church or with a cure potion) in three days you turn into a vampire. Vampires infect you when you fight them, even if you kill them.



    You could try this site for help
    I forget exactly what the whole process is but if you to the G4 website (G4tv.com if memory serves) and look through the database for the show Cheat! it should show you how to get everything that you need.



    Of course if you've already gone there and it still doesn't help then unfortunately I don't know what to tell you